novels.

k so, er well, as i said in my other blog, i blog to help myself improve on my writing skills. I'll be more than happy to write something that i've written recently, but first i'm going to talk about them.
the first one i started was an english assignment, i want to finish it. it was just like 800 words? i cant remember but it was something around there. It was about vampires, of course. Actually, that novel is hard to explain, as its been a while since i last read it. Uh, another one i have its called Alucard Academy. To get the name for the novel, i actually went to yahoo answers. This one i really liked, it was better than any other actually. Alucard is dracula backwards by the way. Uh, i entered that in a school writing contest. I got first for my year and won a $30 gift card for angus and robertson. That novel holds uh nearly 3000 words? and i've recently started writing a new one. It has no name at the moment, it was a dream i had actually. Its about a kidnapping, a best friend of mine was kidnapped along with others, and i'm able to hear things from quite a distance and i manage to save them. So, i plan to finish them sometime, though writing a novel doesnt happen in the space of 1 night, 1 day, 1 month nor 1 year. It'll be a while before they are able to get published, i get that, but hopefully soon they'll be on those book shelves for others to experience what i have created; brought to life for others enjoyent. Heres part of what i have written of my dream:

So i had managed to scare 2 of the kidnappers in the first truck, which was still sitting at the traffic lights on St. Peters Road. Cars sitting behind the truck were honking and yelling abusive words.
The second truck has turned down Maple Road headed towards the cities largest mall. I have no way of getting there quick enough, so i take the truck. I've lost the second truck but from a distance, i hear the roar of its engine and the screaming, terrified people it holds.
I hear he's made it to the mall and he's yelling orders. By the sounds of things, he's unloading them somewhere, a shop perhaps.
I've just made it to the mall, but failed to see where they've been taken. I take my chances in the closest shop..

ok so, comment your likes and dislikes, whats good, needs improvement whatever. Its these comments i need to help improve myself. kbye xo